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Re: Out of a Grey Day
Hi gyrfalcon! I decided to drop in and give your story a friendly review, mostly because you were kind enough to drop in with my story the other day. :) ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: The Infinity Wall
Hi christy! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be reviewing your story today. So, this was a rather nice story. I found it a little hard to get into, but once ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: CloudSea
This is a nice little tidbit. I do like the imagery in it quite a bit. Yet, unfortunately, that's all this is, a tidbit. Consider expanding on it. Any time ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Gotham Writers' Workship: Writing Fiction.
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: TDotDLT
Hi there! I've dropped by to give you a hand with this story, since you did the same with me yesterday. :) This seems to be a well put together ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Orpheus
The tombstones stood in the grey mist like shades upon an otherworldly field. He paid no mind to them; all his thought was bent towards the patch of ground before ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Gamma Ray (1)
So, Jack, since you were so charitable and gave my story a review, I thought I would drop in and return the favor, no matter how poor my critiquing skills ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Help?
Sounds good. Just try to make your story unique. There is a series called Redwall that is rather similar, and if you don't try to make yours different people are ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Prose vs. Poetry vs. Both vs. Other
I would say that I write prose. That's not to say I've never written poetry, I have buttloads of poems sitting around in my room. They're just not going to ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Blodsun
Well, this was a rather interesting piece. I did like how you told a story using poetry. It was a very good story too, well worded and paced and whatnot. ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: What's the stupidest thing you have ever done?
I once threw about 2 gallons of gasoline on a pile of wood in kind of a close area. Then I took a flaming rag on a stick and threw ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: The Writing Process & You
Nice article here, Clo. :) Short and concise, and something I'll have to look back on from time to time. I almost missed this, but I'm glad it finally caught ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Writing Machine.....Compulsive Fibber?
I have to agree with the two people above me. If you do find yourself doing that, just stop and say, "Whoops, what am I saying? That's not what happened!" ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Creating a Story
Go for a walk and let your mind wander. I've found that often helps me when I'm needing a story idea. Really, just clearing your mind and then thinking about ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Stripped Bark
Hi Hannah! :) I have to say that I really loved this poem. It all flowed together so nice and was very beautiful to read. I could see the theme/idea ...
Mar 24, 2009
